>It's 100 words (give or take -- I always let the clan be specified
>for free), and since each couplet is a single thing, isn't this just
>a list of 50 abilities and therefore illegal [HW.18]?
Your description must be composed in complete, grammatical
sentences. No lists; no sentence fragments. Your narrator
may choose to allow sentences like the preceding one, which
break the rules of formal grammar for emphasis or rhythmic
effect.
HW:RiG p18
Sounds alright to me as I don't see the next sentence "She shouldn't permit sentences bent simply to squeeze in more information..." as applying.
--Peter Metcalfe
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