I did want it to be recognizable, but I've already got some ideas to make it more unique. If only I had a chance to sit down and make the chjanges...
Guy
>----- Original Message -----
>From: Guy Hoyle <ghoyle1_at_...>
>To: <GLORANTHA-DIGEST_at_...>
>Sent: Wednesday, October 18, 2000 8:05 PM
>Subject: LITTLE VINGA RED-HOOD
>
>
>> First draft. Please send me critiques, suggestions, etc. It's very
>> sketchy at the moment.
>
>Feel like alredy heard... But I like it a lot, except perhaps you should
try
>to inove a little bit, not using so close name, and situation, to make the
>story more different. Don't take my comment in count if it was your desire
>to stay close to the original one.
>Gizmo
>
>
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