I think the ASCII graphics are fine, but if someone comes up with a fancier solution, all the better.
In the sections on exploring and heroquesting, you may
want to use slightly less definate phrasing (i.e. "You will probably want to do everything you can to reduce the risks of this activity. Some or all of the following may help") because some of the suggestions, while widely believed to be true on this list, haven't been confirmed from any official source, and may be a bit speculative (such as Earth season being the best time to perform the Uralda heroquest).
Finally, on the heroquest advice, you should probably mention to make sure your current clan magic score is good ("Luck is important when questing. You may want to horde up the favor of the gods, take advantage of fortuitous events, or even beg a gift of luck as a favor prior to attempting your quest.")
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