My only slight query would be that--as the Oliver's current myth stands--the tor is a product of Helamakt's defeated briny foes. At first glance, this would seem to suggest some quelled Sea force or remnant of the mighty gods and godlings battle, that was not destroyed.
This would not necessarily be that impressed with the Storm Tribe, and might act under force rather than through altruism. Perhaps at the finale of the conflict he saw some power squirming in the morass of defeated foes and cast down Searing Bolt (*his* one) in one step scorching the tor to marble and sealing the daimon inside.
The daimon might therefore be a rather complex force, not entirely in line with the Orlanthi defenders and one to be entreated carefully. Maybe it seeks again the seas, and is a 'one shot weapon' to be used in return for his release, so that it can rage across the land to the rivers, and thence to the sea.
Of course, the other tack is to have some later element that supplies the daimon, more friendly to the Orlanthi.
Cheerio,
Stu.
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