Re: Scathach the Iron Shrew

From: Oliver D. Bernuetz <bernuetz_at_...>
Date: Mon, 15 Mar 2004 20:30:54 -0000


I'd said:
>
> Okay, you've convinced me. I'll rewrite the description so she
> witnesses her sister taking the Vingan path and finding it hollow.
> Her own reaction to her tragedy was to stick to her guns.
>

Done. Check out the revised story at:
http://www.eparsnip.f2s.com/phpwiki/index.php?Scathach%20the%20Iron% 20Shrew

I like this better than the original actually, you guys were right.

Oliver

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