True but that is a pretty standard literary/cinematic feature.
>
> The other thing I'd really like to include is the big scene where
Rana
> walks in on the wedding party straight from fighting her way though
> the Lunars. Recently married doesn't quite have the same impact.
>
Done. I'm working on a story called Rana in Hell that explains what
happened to her.
Oliver
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