Peter Metcalfe
<< Further errors in it, IMO, are:
- - the ludicrous consititional republic of the Caladralanders
- - the Only Old One's fleet sailing the open seas long past the
date of the Closing.
>>
I do not agree that the Caladralanders constitutional republic is inherently
'ludicrous'. This is a country that has a peculiar religion (Caladra and
Aurelion), a peculiar ruler (the Pharoah) for 300years. The government is not
described as "constitutional", and could be a description of Orlanthi Chief
practices modified by Esrolian Sacrificial King ideas.
Neither is the Only Old One's described as sailing the open seas. I was under
the impression that the Mirrorsea Bay was not directly affected by the Closing
(like Ozur's Bay, the Suam Chow, Maslo Sea, ..) and the fleet could easily
patrol the bay and it's islands.
Keith N.