Hi All,
There's a revised version of the Redalda's Foal quest up on my site now.
Thanks to Charles' and Wulf's suggestions, I've done the following:
- Made it explicit in "Quest Requirements" that the "Fool Foal" station is the
one where the quest challenge will take place, and added a couple of examples.
- Amended the "Fool Foal" station to include stuff about it being the quest
challenge.
- Removed the "Finding the way home" station - it was pretty redundant.
- Amended "Results" to clarify the rating of the new item or ability gained.
- Added a note, and examples, under "Results" to emphasise that the listed
benefits are just suggestions and that many more are possible.
- Amended the "If Eurmal Fooled the Hero" Section.
- Increased Carryover for the "Fool Foal" station to reflect its pivotal
nature.
I now return you to the ongoing discussion of outhouses.
Regards,
Bruce