> wrote:
>
> > Affinities:
> > Darkmoon (Enchant Shackle, Find Fugitive, Flay, Coerce, Fanatical
> > Brotherhood)
> > Mastery (Heal wound, Resist Pain, Master Own Emotions, Control
> > Others Emotions)
> > Stasis (Sense Deviation, Read Mind, Oath, Sense Truth)
>
> Seems rather dry to me. Try:
>
> Heart of Darkness (Reveal Crime, Feel Guilt, Badge of Shame,
> Follow Dark Path, Sense Tortured Soul)
>
> Bondage (Enchant Shackle, Find Fugitive, Coerce, Flay, Oath)
>
> Discipline (Withstand Pain, Extirpate Weakness, Torment Self, Stand
> Fast)
>
> > Secret: Free Mind (allows the character to free themselves of any
> > mundane or magical influence or control)
>
> Secret: Redemption (allows character to cleanse any
> wrongdoing committed by himself or others *if* they are
> repentant).
>
> --Peter Metcalfe
Huge improvement. Many thanks.
Dave Bell