RE: character narrative

From: bryan neff <nagilfar_at_...>
Date: Sat, 7 Oct 2000 14:23:18 -0700 (PDT)


Hello again.
 As I get the rules under my belt, I finally got up the courage to try a character in the narrative form. I would appreciate feedback. Specifically, am I on the right track in terms of using keywords? Is it ok to include improved feats in the creation as he is a devotee? Also, do I have to include any further details of on my dependents? General feedback or other comments welcomed as well. Thanks!

Ursus is a tough Heortling hunter devoted to Odayla. His great strength allows him to
weild the Mighty Hunting Bow of his clan. Despite his massive build, Ursus swims and
jumps like the Great Bear himself. Ursus catches prey easily with his Burst of Speed feat.
His Bear Hide feat turns the blows of enemies.When angered, he can cause fear with his
Terrifying Roar feat. Though ferocious by nature,Ursus protects two orphaned cub
children. He is a friend of Elves and learned to climb in their forests. With vengence,
Ursus hunts the Redmoon for allowing Chaos into his hunting grounds.



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