Looks good. I'd add that Juror might give you a clan relationship, ability or even a feat from Orlanth Lawspeaker. Probably just give it as Juror 13 and put it under relationships.
Long-winded could be a flaw (in speech) or a regular ability (as in stamina).
You get Ehlenna as an ally or follower or patron (best as ally IMO) and a relationship to her clan (X).
Thom
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