Of course, you've forgotten the key preparation of divining *which* professorial daimons will be the examiners and making sure the thesis contains frequent and flattering references to their work! But the only substantive nitpick I'd make is that Station 7, the critical examination, should surely be a quest challenge in which the candidate wagers the knowledge in question. Failure doesn't just mean that he hasn't become a Sage, it can mean a total loss of that expertise...
But overall it certainly sounds familiar - nice job!
All the best
Mark
Mark Galeotti
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