<< THE YANAFAL VISION>>
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<< Like a red flower blooming, like a second sun rising, like a bat out of
hell, Death
Itself swoops over the enemy ranks.>>
Anyone tempted to screech "like a bat out of hell" in impersonation of Meat Loaf at this stage has my sympathy. I loved your scene setting Nick, all that juicy Carmanian crunching. I still think of the Lunar Empire as a Carmanian dynasty change.
Keith
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