> Actually, wouldn't it be an excellent forshadowing of the kitori
> mishap to have the kitori involved at the beginning and then have
a -
> major- falling out with Broyan. Maybe not enough to start a feud,
> but certainly enough for the kitori to withdraw their support (and
> forces) and provide a motive for the death of Broyan later on.
>
> Actually this ties in nicely with the "revealed Tarkalor" sub-plot
> mentioned earlier. If one of Kallyr or Broyan's hero band is
> revealed as Tarkalor this would be more than enough to majorly piss
> off the Kitori, especially if Broyan refuses to distance himself
> from, or renounce, Tarkalor...
This is a great idea and one that we should incorporate into the subplot. Foreshadowing good!
BTW - good to get everyone together isn't it?
Jeff
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