BTW - why not have Melisande be taken hostage? Jane - does this work for you?
Jeff
-----Original Message----- From: Oliver D. Bernuetz [mailto:bernuetz_at_...] Sent: Tuesday, March 09, 2004 10:59 AM To: whitewall_at_yahoogroups.com Subject: Re: Possible girlfriend for Broyan wrote:Hurricane!
> This works for me. My only comment is that I don't think
Broyan loves
> her passionately (and has no interest in marrying her). He
finds her
> interesting and entertaining, but he is not bound to the
relationship -
> as far as he is concerned it could change tomorrow. Lots of
flings, not
> a lot of emotional interest in the relationship.
>
> Things are probably different from her point of view. I
imagine this to
> be like one of JFK's affairs. Broyan has always *known* this
is just a
> fling, but Melisande views it quite differently.
>
That really makes her a tragic figure. I like it. Poor thing. Oliver The New World Is Born On the Walls On Whitewall. Come the
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