> I guess I don't understand why she needs to have personal
experience
> with being a Vingan at all. Orlanthi women are tough - IMO
> generally tougher than the men. They are the ones who have to make
> the really hard choices - how do we survive is tougher than how do
> we die honorably.
>
Okay, you've convinced me. I'll rewrite the description so she witnesses her sister taking the Vingan path and finding it hollow. Her own reaction to her tragedy was to stick to her guns.
Now you just have to convince Jane:-)
Oliver
Powered by hypermail