The Blue Vadeli weren't underneath the sweet sea. The Blue People were related to the Waertagi.
Onto the real issue. Part of the problem is that Charg is near to
the Kingdom of War
and it's very difficult to construct a meaningful threat that tops
them - at best, you end up
with an anticlimax. If you want a threat that is everything that the
Kingdom of War is not
- again you have a problem in that Dorastor is not so far away.
So rather than have it as the source of an all-conquering horde that
sweeps all before its
path, you might be better of having it as the perfect conquest. That
way you get Jonatings,
the Lunar Empire, the Arrolians, the Mostali, the Kingdom of War and
the Trolls all
turning up for a chance to kick butt.
So what would this perfect conquest have? A peaceful civilization
full of booty ready for
taking? That's too boring and besides Zoria already exists.
--Peter Metcalfe
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