On 14 Dec 2006, at 20:33, Adrian Smith wrote:
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> Octavian is a Darra Happen, humakti katchari swordsman, sometime
> leader, politician, duellist, tactician, combat analyst and judge of
> people, with a talent for savoir-faire and obfuscation. Divinely
> gifted, Octavian is empathic, charming, diplomatic, fearless,
> honey-tongued, handsome, alert and disciplined, therefore
> inspirational and persuasive. Octavian's eidetic-memory, lightning,
> reflexes, great endurance, keen senses, strong will and subtlety mark
> him as a prodigy. Octavian benefits from a symbiotic ancestral
> possession and the ancestral memories of his line. Strong,
> ambidextrous, double-jointed, agile, fast, sneaky and elusive,
> Octavian confounds enemies with feints and evasions from his lightning
> footwork, his magical longswords, gauntlets and weightless armor.
Quote him p20 (all emphasis mine)
"Compose your description in complete, grammatical sentences. NO
LISTS OF ABILITIES; No sentence fragments"
"If your narrator decides a sentence is just a list, she may allow
you JUST THE FIRST TWO ABILITIES, or she may tell you to REWRITE THE
SENTENCE."