Quote him p20 (all emphasis mine)
"Compose your description in complete, grammatical sentences. NO
LISTS OF ABILITIES; No sentence fragments"
"If your narrator decides a sentence is just a list, she may allow
you JUST THE FIRST TWO ABILITIES, or she may tell you to REWRITE THE SENTENCE."
And if the player still insists on writing lists, well, there is always the list method for character creation. Maybe he should use that instead?
~Kevin McD
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