Your story was great. I enjoyed it.
For "accuracy" I make the following comments
>> Malia left the conspiracy soon after the Devil was born, and used the raw
chaos she had stolen to create her own children, the disease spirits, and
though Subere ever desired to hunt her down and destroy her for her
treachery, she was forever busy destroying the chaos that seeps through the
twisted inner gate. So Malia, Mother of Disease, escaped and lives on. <<
Chalana Array cast mighty magic to defeat Malia and her diseased issue. Unfortunately, one of the original diseases escaped. That one we know today as _Plague_.
I believe the question as to Malia, whether she fully repented and became part of the compromise, or is still a Chaos entity, is still open for debate.
martin 102541.3423_at_compuserv Deville - The Wastelands
Glad to have you back writing.
Brian
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