Answering David Dunham's question. (From: What do people know about Jaldon)

From: Matthew Cole <matthew.cole_at_6V8UXtjINj_w_QGVdAw7O11mKqzQ3w_DteOffMHt_qNkV5ZZHJfbc3qIj-iC8mD>
Date: Tue, 22 Jul 2008 15:27:04 +0100


Heya

I don't have the 100 word we used for our scenario available here but I noticed this little passage on imdb. It's pretty much the sort of thing:

Set within a year after the events of Batman Begins, Batman, Lieutenant James Gordon, and new district attorney Harvey Dent successfully begin to round up the criminals that plague Gotham City until a mysterious and sadistic criminal mastermind known only as the Joker appears in Gotham, creating a new wave of chaos. Batman's struggle against the Joker becomes deeply personal, forcing him to "confront everything he believes" and improve his technology to stop him. A love triangle develops between Bruce Wayne, Dent and Rachel Dawes.

I'd underline: Batman, Gordon, Dent, round up criminals, plague Gotham, mysterious and sadistic criminal, Joker, new wave of chaos, Batman's struggle against Joker, deeply personal, confront everything he believes, improve his technology, love triangle.

S'funny, when you read that list as a sentence, it scans very well.

Hope that gets my point across.            

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