Re: The Lovers

From: Oliver D. Bernuetz <bernuetz_at_...>
Date: Fri, 23 Apr 2004 21:26:28 -0000

Donald said:
> I also wonder if we're tying
> the named characters too closely together. I know Orlanthi go in for
> complex relationships but there are several hundred people in WW and
> it seems a bit strange that the dozen we've mentioned so far are all
> related this closely.

True but that is a pretty standard literary/cinematic feature.
> The other thing I'd really like to include is the big scene where
> walks in on the wedding party straight from fighting her way though
> the Lunars. Recently married doesn't quite have the same impact.

Done. I'm working on a story called Rana in Hell that explains what happened to her.


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